Week 9: iFixit Update

Good news! We got the device we wanted, the Ridgid Pipe Cutter, our proposal was accepted, and we have already received feedback on our device page. 

The only negative thing we need to fix is the wording used in the background section. The technical writing team said, "Because the primary purpose of this page is to help people with failing devices, you should avoid marketing language in this section. Please revise your text to be more informative than salesy." So we'll get that fixed. I also had a couple of questions on the use of the warranty page and if we should include that so that may also be a change. 



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  1. Samantha SurowiecOctober 20, 2022 at 10:13 AM

    Hi Sydney!
    It looks like you guys have a really good start here. I'm glad you got the tool that you were wanting, I know my partner Lexie and I were also lucky in that area. I have no doubt that you and Adam will be able to do this project well. Good luck to you both! Can't wait to see what you do with the pipe cutter page.

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